New beginning and reflections

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MAR

2

2009

9:35 am

I’ve been dragging my butt for a week, but I finally started the new one. It’s not quite a new one. It’s a cyberpunk premise I’ve been batting around for a while. I figured it was a good idea to write something outside of my usual genre between projects.

I have the first page down plus a little and it reminds me how hard it is to start anew. It also reminds me that my first page never stays so not to worry to much about making it sparkle.

I was browsing blogs and what not about Golden Heart finalists. Yes, it’s March so inevitably, I have the Golden Heart announcements on the brain even though they’re three weeks away. There are authors who have finalled in the GH year after year after year. That tells me not to beat myself up if I don’t final as I’m probably competing against people who are good at finalling and know what they’re doing when it comes to the GH. It also tells me that there are a lot of great authors out there with great books who still take years and years to get published.

Does that make me feel better? I don’t know. But it’s reality.

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Query wars: Ouch and double ouch

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27

2009

2:55 pm

I don’t care what people say, nicely worded rejections DO hurt less. I got a one-two agent punch in the head today – back to back rejections. One on a full request and one on a partial.

They both said the writing was good, but it’s not a right fit for them or the market. One of them used the term “extremely well written.” A crumb, but a tasty one. Got the same response from a pie-in-the-sky full request a couple of weeks ago.

I’m still holding out hope that if the writing is phenomenal (I have a lot more work to do on that front) then someone will overlook the fact that there’s not a huge market for Asian themed romance and take a chance on a kid like me. :)

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Author Kristin Higgins at Romance Divas Feb 25th-26th

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23

2009

9:14 am

From the Call to the Bookstore

February 25th-26th at Romance Divas

Featuring:
KRISTAN HIGGINS

Want to know what it takes to get from “the call” to the bookstore in New York publishing? Romance Divas is hosting a 2-day workshop with RITA award winning author Kristan Higgins, who can answer that question and many more! It will take place at the Romance Diva Forum. All are welcome. To get access to the forum you will need to register.

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Fate but not destiny

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20

2009

8:52 am

I was revising a manuscript today and using thesaurus.com, trying to come up with the correct way I wanted to describe this feeling my heroine was having. Then I realized why I couldn’t put my finger on it. The idea I was trying to capture was yuán fèn. The fate of bringing two people together. It’s not love at first sight. It’s not attraction. There’s no word for it in English.

There’s another saying about yuán fèn that translates roughly into: “Fate without destiny”. That’s when two people are brought together, but it’s just not in the cards that they stay together. The English saying of “Not meant to be” just doesn’t capture the bittersweet sadness of “Fate without destiny”.

So to turn my thinking back on its tail, which I like to do –
Lately I’ve been getting better responses to my queries, which is a little spot of happiness. This week has been a roller coaster. Started the week with some awesome requests to be followed up with a couple disappointing rejections. It’s all part of this cycle and I’m thinking that these agents and I, so far we have fate but not destiny. My query and opening pages are getting my toe in the door and that’s a big start. I’m just not closing the deal and I need to work on that.

There are still nibbles out there. I have to get those requests from earlier in the week out and hopefully this time, destiny awaits. Enough spiritual philosophizing – back to work. Destiny wants the lazy description in this paragraph polished up.

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Worldbuilding at its best: Interview with R.F. Long

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17

2009

8:06 am

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One of the hardest things to do as an author is create a living, breathing world in which characters can grow and interact. When an author tries to force an unnatural setting onto the page, it becomes obvious and the effort falls flat in the worst way. Fantasy author R.F. Long, author of the upcoming book The Scroll Thief, has an amazing ability to spin out magical worlds with effortless grace in every story. I am pleased to have been able to interview her for this blog.

Tell us about your inspiration for Scroll Thief. What made you want to tell this story?

For a long time I was working on a very traditional epic fantasy and associated stories. I love this sort of thing but there are a lot of them around. The Holtlands were born from this first novel, so was my novella The Wolf’s Sister. But one day I was wondering about the other lands surrounding the Holtlands – what they might be like, what their history was and how they interacted with the people and lands about which I was already writing. One of my characters, Bareda, starts off that epic, in Klathport which also set me thinking about what her life was like there. She’s a minor character in The Scroll Thief, but that story was never destined to be her story.

Mdina, the "silent city" of Malta. According to the author - "It captured something of Klathport for me, the way I imagine a once opulent, desert city."

Mdina, the "silent city" of Malta. According to the author - "It captured something of Klathport for me, the way I imagine a once opulent, desert city."

I’d always loved stories like Arabian Nights, spent my honeymoon in Andalusia in Southern Spain and everything started to gel together once I came up with the character of a young thief with far too big an opinion of himself. Initally Malachy was going to be hired to steal a religious artifact by the Mahailian sect, the only way the peaceful worshipers of the Goddess could get it back, but then… well frankly, he wouldn’t take the job. It was going to take a fair amount of bullying to keep him in line. Halia fitted the bill exactly. Malachy’s older sister, the former courtesan and sometime criminal mastermind, was initially intended to be killed off, but my husband, on reading the first chapters, wouldn’t let me.

What was your process for research?
Mainly I tend to look things up as I go along, getting the information as and when I need it. However, because of my great love of the art and architecture of Andalusia and the mythologies upon which I often base my writing, I sort of spend my life in a perpetual state of research. I work in a library, so I don’t find research of any kind onerous. I also really enjoy and make use of television documentaries as a quick way of gathering information which I can later build on. I love Celtic legends particularly, but I’m starting to read up on Norse legends of late. The Internet offers a vast array of information, some sites more reputable than others, so I feel it is important to check the sources and follow up on references. Cross referencing is vital. I have a few books at home which I use constantly – Rollestone’s Myths & Legends of the Celtic Race, Encyclopedia of World Mythology, Everyday Life in the Middle Ages etc. I’m always on the lookout for things like that – books, sites, artwork, music – anything that will provide both research possibilities and inspiration.

Many authors stay in one world for an entire series after they’ve created it because it takes so much effort and research. I’m always amazed, however, at your ability to recreate a world with each new story. How do you do it?

The lost village of Iliz Koz in northern Brittany - swallowed up by sand in the 15th century and rediscovered in 1960.

More inspiration: The lost village of Iliz Koz in northern Brittany - swallowed up by sand in the 15th century and rediscovered in 1960.

Well, The Wolf’s Sister, its sequel, The Wolf’s Mate and The Scroll Thief are set in the same world, but only the first two in the same land. I think its important in any fantasy world that the countries and races are not just carbon copies of each other, or indeed exact copies of our world in the middle ages with extra magic. My forthcoming novel Soul Fire, is set in our world and the world of the Sidhe of Irish folklore. I love playing with new ideas, and with worldbuilding, even at the most subtle level. Whether building a new world with landscapes, history and mythologies of its own, or altering our own world to allow the magical and fantastic to creep through, the key thing for me is a combination of consistency and believability. I always ask myself why a character might do something, and so by extension why a country might have a law banning magic, or why iron might drive away faeborn people. Once I have a reason for something, I make sure I stick to that reason throughout the novel and treat it as a fact of existence, rather than something I’ve made up.

You live in Ireland which to me is a magical place in and of itself. How much does that play into your creative process?

I think very much so, for a number of reasons. Ireland has a long tradition of story telling – you just have to sit down and ask someone how their day has been in order to get a story out of them. Its a recognised entertainment. Ireland’s mythology comes from an oral tradition and many stories, particularly when you reach the folklore, were written down from oral sources and that tone has carried through. “Once of a time” many of them begin, a small step away from “Once upon a time”.

As one of my inspirations is music, particularly Irish traditional music, much of the rhythm of my writing and the songs to which I listen as I write tie together.

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Colimore Harbour with Dalkey Island in the background. Dalkey is the author's hometown.

I’m a nut about the craft of writing. Can you give any pointers on specific techniques or devices you use? (Don’t feel like you have to spill all your secrets, just a little hint)

I plan out a plot, but only lightly – no more than a paragraph for a chapter, a line or two per scene. It gives an overview of the story arc, but still allows me the freedom to let the story take me where it will. Usually if I get stuck with a story, I’ve tried to push it in a way it didn’t want to go. I have found that I need some sort of guideline (otherwise the story just runs on and on and I end up rewriting an enormous amount) but it still need fluidity and freedom to go where it will.

One technique I find particularly useful in constructing scenes, particularly in a fantasy setting, is to try to engage all five senses. The human sense of smell is one of the most evocative tools, so if I describe Cerys the healer’s hands smelling of lemons, the reader instantly knows what that is. Some readers will also know of the antisceptic properties of lemon juice, its use in early medicine, and that too is consistent with the character. She has both a reason to smell of lemons, and a scent that readers identify easily.

Following on from that, the same is true of sound, taste and touch – as writers we often overuse sight descriptions, whereas if you take a moment out of your busy day to just stop and experience the world around you, you will hear traffic or birdsong, or a conversation in the next room, of the hiss of a gas fire beneath the noise of the television. You will feel the cushion at your back, or the breeze running through your hair, or the blush of heat in the cheek turned towards the sunlight. You may taste the remnants of that chocolate you had earlier, or the slight aftertaste of berries in a glass of wine. There is more to experiencing the world than what we see. I think its important to bring that in to writing as well.

The vacation pictures were a lovely bonus and they have convinced me that I absolutely must travel to exotic locations as part of my Adventures in Romance. It’s a hard job, but someone has to do it. Thank you for the interview and the tiny peek into your creative process!

The Scroll Thief is available February 24, 2009 from Samhain Publishing. I know I’m clamoring for a copy.  More information about the magical worlds of R.F. Long can be found at: http://www.rflong.com

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Starting all over again

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16

2009

5:24 am

So I wrote “The End” on the wip last week and, as always, I go into a bit of a doldrum after finishing. What do I work on next?

It seems that other authors I know are always brimming with ideas. My mind is not so effusive – especially not when I want it to be. I don’t hear the voices of my characters, I don’t have plot bunnies dancing around as I fall asleep.

I do know I want to move away from my usual setting for a bit, but where to go? I’m starting to outline and daydream to see if this nebulous idea I have will spin into something more solid and I am so envious of authors with great plot ideas just lined up and banging on the door to get out.

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Happy Valentine's Day!

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14

2009

6:00 am

heartsI supposed a romance blog can’t be without a Valentine’s day post. I’ve got nothing spectacular planned, so I thought I’d just post of a list of those romance books that captured what good heart-warming, gut wrenching romance should be. They’ve all influenced my writing romance writing and I re-read them for pointers.

So without any explanation other than I love these stories and in no particular order:

Vows – Lavyrle Spencer
Suddenly You – Lisa Kleypas
Blue-Eyed Devil – Lisa Kleypas
Once a Princess – Johanna Lindsey
Renegade Bride – Barbara Ankrum
Gone with the Wind – Margaret Mitchell
Pride and Prejudice – Jane Austen
Ain’t She Sweet – Susan Elizabeth Philips
Jane Eyre – Charlotte Bronte
Born in Ice – Nora Roberts

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My new writing playground

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13

2009

5:56 am

I have yet another playground on the internet – Miss Snark’s First Victim’s blog. Self described as a blog for aspiring authors, the site’s mistress “Authoress” is currently hosting a Secret Agent contest. Aspiring authors send in 250 word entries to be critiqued by a faithful following of bloggers as well as the Secret Agent of the month, who is actually a literary agent. Get this – the Secret Agent comments on every entry that makes the cutoff. A guaranteed agent critique! This month’s call for submission included romance so I jumped into the fray.

I’m getting some great pointers in my entry and reading the other entries is really helping me get a sense of what works in an opening. There are some very conscientious and thoughtful critiquers following this blog. Many of them are familiar with each other’s works, commenting that “they like the changes” or “it’s come a long way”. I might have to hang around a little more, though the last thing I need is another internet vortex.

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The End.

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11

2009

9:24 pm

I typed “The End” today on Silk and Seduction (formerly titled Silk and Shadows).

*big sigh*
:)

Tonight I’m going to celebrate…tomorrow I start edits on my novella. Going to give “Silk” a week or two before I open it again.

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The infamous "Little Sis"

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8

2009

11:08 am

Anyone who knows about my writing adventures has probably heard me talk about Little Sis. Today, February 8, is her birthday so I thought it was fitting time to write a tribute to her.

Little sis is actually my younger sister. But she’s a lot more. She’s my confidant, my partner in crime, the person who knows more about me than anyone in the world, yada, yada…

Little Sis' cat; affectionately dubbed the Ginger Beast. The picture belies his humongous size since he managed to stuff his fat butt onto my laptop to keep me from writing.

Little Sis' cat; affectionately dubbed the Ginger Beast. The picture belies his humongous size since he managed to stuff his big feline butt onto my laptop to keep me from writing.

For the purposes of my writing adventures, Little Sis is my primary critique partner, my brainstorming buddy and the embodiment of my ideal reader. I trust her more than anyone in the world because 1) she understands my stories 2) she’s tough as nails and won’t let me get away with anything.

Little sis will take hard copy of my manuscript and read through the entire thing, writing in the margins:
1) Lazy, try harder
2) Go deeper, what’s her emotional reaction?
3) His eyes are ALWAYS blue, change it up
4) More conflict!
5) Chapters 8, 9 and 10 are going to have to be re-written entirely
6) And, once in a while, the coveted: Good!

But that’s not why I love her. I love her because after doing all that and making me go through all these painful edits, she’ll do it again. It takes a special sort of tough love and care to do that.

Little sis used to read my stories when I wrote in a spiral notebook in junior high school. Sometimes she would wait beside me and I’d hand over a page as soon as I finished. She didn’t used to edit then, because she was eight years old. But imagine someone who basically used to play editor and critique partner as a child. She read all the books I read and more. Little sis got through the LOTR trilogy before high school and I couldn’t even get past the Shire.

Then after college, little sis put her money where her mouth was and declared she was going to be a writer in a family where mum wanted us all to be doctors or lawyers. That took some conviction. Little sis completed her MFA and has published a short story in a literary magazine, written a screenplay and started several novels. She’s got way more writing cred than I do.

I learned how to critique from her. Her philosophy is that any manuscript can be made better and she genuinely loves to read. As a result, she’s one of the readers who can take a polished, pretty solid manuscript and not be content to let it rest. Good is not good enough. It needs to shine and resonate and dig deep. Sometimes I feel I wouldn’t know what to do without her. When I get stuck, I actually want to fly across the country and throw my manuscript at her feet and beg for her to look at it.

Who are your writing partners you can’t do without?

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