Last Day for Brenda Novak Auction

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Happy Memorial Day to US visitors!

As the Brenda Novak auction nears a close, I wanted to put in a plug for the HUGE gift basket that the Ruby-Slippered Sisterhood has posted. For the last two months, the Ruby Sisters have been sending goodies from all over to me and I think it’s an absolute steal.

Ruby-Slippered Sisterhood Giftbasket of Goodies

What do you get?

- A partial critique from 3 Golden Heart ’09 finalists including moi – Cynthia Justlin (Suspense), Amanda Brice (YA), Jeannie Lin (Historical)

- Books from published sisters – Liz Talley, Addison Fox, Vivi Andrews, Kelly Fitzpatrick

- Snacks and goodies from all over the country. Pecan cake, hot sauce, Goo goo clusters, Moon Pies, chocolates, and more…

- Craft books at least worth $80 by themselves

- And more…much, much more!

I am sorely tempted to bid myself and keep all these goodies gathered in my living room, but that wouldn’t be fair at all. Come take a look. It’s for a good cause.

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The Ruby-Slippered Sisterhood Blog is here!

Filed in: Announcements | guest blogs | writing    Tags: bemis productions | blog contests | critiques | finalists | golden heart | ruby-slippered sisterhood | writing contests

The Ruby-Slippered Sisterhood (of which I am a proud member) unveils our blog today (9/21/2009)  in honor of the opening of Golden Heart® season.

For everyone considering the Golden Heart® contest or working on polishing their manuscripts, the Sisterhood is offering critiques and other giveaways for our inaugral month as well as tips and musings on our respective writing journeys. These women are some of the most amazing and inspiring people I’ve met and, as you can see from the blog, quite a fun group.

The Golden Heart® will always hold a special place in my heart. Before I was announced as a finalist, very few agents or editors would give my time period a chance. The GH® opened doors for me and in a span of three months I went from having a manuscript that was almost ready to be stuffed under the bed to signing an agent and selling!

My first blog for the RSS is this Friday in which I discuss why I finaled. I’m giving away a first chapter critique on that day and I hope that the GH® will open doors for many aspiring authors this year. Other Ruby Sisters are offering critiques as well, so come by and join the launch party all month.

Oh, and definitely ogle the beautiful site design from our own Elisabeth Bemis. She did an amazing job, didn’t she?

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Critique on Silk and Seduction (aka The Dragon and the Pearl)

Filed in: Asian fantasy | craft | writing    Tags: critiques | revisions | silk and seduction | the dragon and the pearl

Already I have a major change — Got a great title suggestion from chaptermate Elizabeth Grayson. Silk and Seduction is going to morph into The Dragon and the Pearl. Isn’t that snazzy? I’m very bad with title-fu so I’m sending cyber-kisses out to Elizabeth. *mwah* *mwah* I just lucked out with “Butterfly Swords”.

I finally got up the courage to open up Little Sis’ package with my manuscript for “D and P” inside. All in all, she was a lot harder on Butterfly first time around, so I’m feeling a little better. Sure she envisions rewriting everything after the midpoint on. *sigh* Got work to do.

It got me to thinking. Even though I don’t plan on putting in all the fixes she suggests verbatim, they’re each telling me something is missing there — whether it be conflict or characterization. Sometimes it’s a huge structural change, like I know I need some sort of milestone that the heroine and hero both achieve together in Chapters 12-14. It’s absent now. And some are 1-2 lines here and there, like evolving the relationship with each chapter.

That’s how I take all critiques. On the first level, the issue is “this is not working” and then the specific details give me clues about what might work. But even if I don’t agree with the clues, it doesn’t take away the fact that something needs to change. I think writers often stop listening when they don’t like the suggested tweaks.

Even though I rely heavily on Little Sis and other readers, in the end the revision comes down to very personal decisions. I’m reminded of a Tyson Beckford quote from Bravo’s “Make me a Supermodel”. (I confess, I watch trashy reality tv.)

Paraphrased, like all my quotes:
“A good model does what the cameraman wants them to do. A supermodel gives him something he didn’t even know he wanted.”

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Charity Auction at Ciar Cullen's blog

Filed in: Announcements | events | miscellaneous    Tags: auction | charity | critiques | e-books | golden heart critique

Romancing a Cause Auction!

Help friends from Romance Divas support a romance writer who is struggling. She and her husband have lost their home, both lost their jobs, and we don’t want them to lose hope. Be a Diva and have a ball with these awesome books. A new auction every day! Please, only serious bidders. Bidding opens for each day at 12:01 am, EST. Thanks!

Each day features a different auction so come back everyday to bid! I’m featured on Monday, April 6th in the Rose group:

The Rose Group–April 6 (bidding closes 10pm EST).

• 30 page critique from Golden Heart ® finalists: by Amanda Brice, Cynthia Justlin & Jeannie Lin
• Ebooks: One Wild Weekend & Click: by T. Sue Veerstag
• Ebook: Snowbound by M.G. Braden

Romancing a Cause Auction at Ciar Cullen’s Collapsing Universe

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